I have commented on this in LJ but I wanted to gush some more. ;-)
"It took Pavel from the position of an occasional distraction to an individual McCoy took full responsibility for the emotional well being of"
That's such a simple way to say something very complicated and it makes a lot of sense in their situation that McCoy as a doctor is reticent, or at least conflicted over the decision, to add someone else to the list of people he has to take care of.
"His stomach clenched when his thoughts turned to penetration – to baring his anus, well aware that dark hairs curled more profusely in the cleft of his body than Pavel's, and to sticking his legs up, thick as his thighs and calves were. He had a stubborn image in mind of how ridiculous he'd seem in contrast to how easy Pavel made it look."
I love this part because you don't often see Bones written as self-conscious or shy, but he feels he has reason to be because he compares himself to Pavel, it's a very realistic interpretation of what his feelings might be.
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Date: 2009-06-16 10:18 am (UTC)"It took Pavel from the position of an occasional distraction to an individual McCoy took full responsibility for the emotional well being of"
That's such a simple way to say something very complicated and it makes a lot of sense in their situation that McCoy as a doctor is reticent, or at least conflicted over the decision, to add someone else to the list of people he has to take care of.
"His stomach clenched when his thoughts turned to penetration – to baring his anus, well aware that dark hairs curled more profusely in the cleft of his body than Pavel's, and to sticking his legs up, thick as his thighs and calves were. He had a stubborn image in mind of how ridiculous he'd seem in contrast to how easy Pavel made it look."
I love this part because you don't often see Bones written as self-conscious or shy, but he feels he has reason to be because he compares himself to Pavel, it's a very realistic interpretation of what his feelings might be.